(My work brings me in contact with people who have suffered devastating tragedies in some way in their life. This poem is ‘inspired’ – am not sure that’s an appropriate word – by one such tragedy.)
He stood shivering
wet skin and dry eyes;
He jingled
jangled tunes
breaking through
torn pocket
wounds.
He lived rough
and pretended to be
oh so tough;
Meagre possessions
in a broken cart
a blanket, cigarettes
and a burnt out heart.
Where will he
sleep tonight?
Underneath the
plastic sheet
behind the
garbage bin
fiddlin’ with
her frayed picture
he’d gambled
with life
And
didn’t win.
Dear Anjali,
Thank you very much this wonderful poem which, for me, conveys truths which many people would like to ignore. We see the man you describe every day. One day, he is holding a sign. Another day she is sitting alone on a bench, as traffic speeds by.
It conveys something of how we all desire respect. We wish for it from others, and perhaps even act as if they’re giving it, when secretly we may fear they’re not.
This could also be the CEO whose life, though materially affluent, is utterly empty of meaning.
So much meaning…thank you for this!
All good wishes,
robert
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Robert for your visit. I am very touched by your sensitive and thought-provoking comment. Indeed, we see these ‘invisibles’ everywhere but we avert our eyes and pretend they do not exist. I hope some day in this world compassion will overtake indifference and love overcomes hate.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Anjali,
Oh how I agree with your comments that “compassion will overtake indifference and love overcomes hate!”
All good wishes,
robert
LikeLike
Robert, thanks for pointing out this could be any of us..even those who appear happy. And yes, this poem points out do many truths. Heartbreaking.
LikeLike
This is poignant
LikeLike
Thank you Rajiv.
LikeLike
What a beautiful poem, written with a heart that can see past the exterior.
🙂
LikeLike
Thank you very much for visiting Staci! Appreciate your lovely comment 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Really enjoyed the poem. It’s wonderful!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Khanindra! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
very strong and moving. real deep
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much!
LikeLike
Dear Anjali,
I am this morning meandering through your blog, revisiting places I’ve been before, and re-enjoying them again. I come to this poem which is one of my favorites.
I was recently at a conference in Louisville, Kentucky on conflict resolution. While getting a coffee one morning, I saw a homeless young man, shivering in the cold, and twitching as he was trying to repeatedly light a cigar which actually had nothing else to light other than the plastic mouthpiece. He was not twitching because of the cold, but for other reasons having to do with his lifestyle, habits, addictions.
It’s funny that, when I saw him, I thought of this poem. Suffering is all around us. I think it’s useful to open to it, even if it may seem painful.
Your poem touches so nicely on this opening.
All good wishes,
robert
LikeLike
I am so touched by this comment – that you should remember my poem! Albeit that in such painful circumstances for that gentleman. Yes- suffering is all around us and sometimes it is easy to ignore it but for how long do we continue doing that? Thanks you once again for your sensitivity and for sharing your observations.
LikeLike